Wine – Bry
I.
The Basics
Your Name: Stephanie
Your Age: 27
Website URL: http://moonparadise.ca.tt
(Silver Moon Paradise - my Sailor Moon fan page)
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Rping Experience: This is my first RPG. I have
written some otaku SM fanfiction in the past.
II. Just Your Everyday Girl…or Boy
Character Name: Amika Irene Cassidy
Name Meaning:
Amika: Means "friendly" in Esperanto. Amika sounded like a cool, exotic name to give my character, it has pizzazz and flair like the Senshi she portrays.
Irene: From the Greek Ειρηνη
(Eirene) which meant "peace". Irene was the
Greek goddess of peace, one of the ‘Ωραι
(Horai). Another famous bearer was an 8th-century
Byzantine empress, the first woman to lead the Empire. She originally served as
regent for her son, but later had him killed and ruled alone. Irene reminded me
of the singer Irene Cara, who performed such hits as "Flashdance"
and "Fame" (which sounds sort of disco-ish).
Cassidy: From an Irish surname which was derived from Ó Caiside
meaning "descendent of Caiside". Caiside is a first name meaning "curly haired"
from Gaelic cas. This is
especially true when Amika changes into Senshi form, she has wavy hair. But one thing that did come
to mind when I chose "Cassidy" for her last name was David Cassidy, a
teen heart-throb from the 70s.
Character Position: Sailor Disco of the Alto Senshi
Birth Date: February 11
Astrological Sign: Aquarius
Age: 17
Blood Type: A+
Birth Place:
Nationality: American by birth, yet her background is British on her mother's
side and American on her father's side.
Occupation: Amika works part-time at the f.y.e. store at the Boulevard Mall and has been working
there for a little over a year. She stocks the shelves, prices new arrivals and
assists the customers with questions and suggestions they might have. It gives
her the chance to meet new people - mostly tourists who arrive from all over
the world - and share her love and knowledge of retro music.
School:
Academic Level: Senior year of high school
Major/Minor: Potential major in dance
GPA: 3.75
School Involvements: Dance, Color Guard
III. The Nitty-Gritty Character Information
Likes: Going to Studio 54 (this is her favorite hangout where she and Amy go to
dance and have fun on weekends), retro music (she is a huge fan of 70s disco
artists like the Bee Gees, Abba, CHIC and Donna Summer as well as 80s artists
like Kool and the Gang), collecting funky jewellery, experimenting with make-up/hairstyles, glitter,
rhinestones, neon lights, mirrorballs, gold/silver
lame, roller disco, "Saturday Night Fever", platform shoes.
Dislikes: Rude people, people who put disco music down,
indifference, people who don't understand her point of view.
Hobbies: Dancing, shopping at vintage clothing stores for cool retro-chic
fashions, listening to music.
Favorite Food: Sushi,
Hated Food: Olives. She tried one and thought it
tasted too weird. Anytime she sees something with olives in it, she picks it
out of her food and sets it aside on her plate.
Favorite Animal: Cat. Amika prefers mysterious kinds
of breeds like Burmese and Siamese, due to their exotic nature - because her
name is quite exotic itself.
Favorite Color: Silver. As a lover of retro music, the color reminds her of the
glittering mirrorballs of Studio 54 where she likes
to go dancing every weekend.
Aspirations: To become a professional dancer. She has taken lessons since she was
6, but has really come into her element when she hits the floor of the club.
She aspires to go to a university with a strong dance program, be it in the
city or out of state. Her ultimate ambition, however, is to be a dancer on
Broadway.
Flaws: Amika's constant drive for perfection can
sometimes alienate her from her friends and classmates at school - she always
wants to be noticed - which can cause tension and sometimes a few fights
(mostly verbal, not physical). She wants the best out of everything and isn't
satisfied unless things are done right.
She tries hard to juggle a full schedule between her academic pursuits, her
part-time job and her ambition to become a dancer, but most of the time it
leads her to physical and emotional breakdowns - there are times when she feels
that she can't handle anything that she loves to do because she tries too hard,
such as getting a bad mark on a school assignment, hurting herself while trying
a difficult dance move or losing a featured role in a musical production. She
puts too much pressure on herself to be the best at everything she does, which
at times causes her to fall apart mentally.
Physical Appearance
Hair color/style: She has shoulder-length brown hair that is straight -
approximately the color of milk chocolate, she usually has it up in a ponytail
on the right side of her head tied with a silver scarf.
Eye color, shape, etc: Wide-set, rounded, blue-green eyes that are always
sparkling with full lashes and thin arched eyebrows that give her a look of
mystery and surprise. Much of the time she wears glittery silver eyeshadow.
Body type/build/skin color/height & weight: Caucasian, 5'6", 115 lbs
with a slim build (yet with the platform heels she often wears, some people
often mistake her for being taller). She has a clear, pale complexion and full
lips often highlighted with makeup (frosted lipstick, etc.). Amika is small-waisted yet curvy,
with a normal hip size. Her legs are long yet muscular from all her dance
training and work in the Color Guard at school, and her arms are long with
slender wrists (often covered by several bangle bracelets). People also think
she looks older than 17 with the makeup she wears.
Walking style/carriage: She walks tall with her head held high and a spring in
her step when she's feeling good, but when she's feeling bad about something
she often walks with a bit of a forward lean, eyes closed, head hung down. On
the dance floor, she lets herself go trying every pose, gesture, step and body position imaginable.
Clothing style: Retro-chic from the late 70s/early 80s. Her styles range from
black leotards/tank tops underneath off-the-shoulder sweatshirts and leggings
with high-top sneakers to flashy halter tops in silver and gold lame, wrap
dresses and miniskirts. She often wears go-go boots or platform heels when she
dresses in her flashier outfits (mostly worn for going out dancing). Amika often accessorizes with big hoop earrings, bangle
bracelets and flashy necklaces.
Distinguishing marks: She has a tiny mole under her right eye to distinguish
herself from her younger sister. They both have similar features (brown hair,
blue-green eyes, pale complexion), yet Amika has this
tiny mole whereas her sister does not.
Other physical appearance details: None, her physical appearance is basically
covered.
Voice: Amika speaks clearly and confidently with an
energetic tone in her voice. Uses a lot of 70s slang when she talks with her
friends like "What's happening" (when she greets a friend), "Far
out!" (her way of expressing excitement), etc.
However, her tone lowers when she expresses her disapproval of something. If
you could equate her speaking style to a celebrity, it would be a cross between
Courteney Cox and Reese Witherspoon.
Personality:
*Popular
*Free-spirited
*Bold
*Daring
*Amiable
*Smart
*Creative
*Trailblazer
Amika is one of the more popular seniors at Clark
High School, known for both her academic and her social skills. She's very
smart and among the top of her class, her hope is to go on to a university with
a good dance program so she can fulfill her ambitions of becoming a
professional dancer on Broadway. Her favorite school subjects are English,
dramatic arts and American history. She can make fast friends as well - she can
be easily spotted in a crowd because of her flashy retro-chic fashion style.
She's the co-captain of the school's Color Guard, and a senior member of the
Dance Team.
She loves listening to music, preferably a lot of retro from the late 70s and
early 80s. On weekends, she likes to go to Studio 54 with her best friend and
dance the night away, but it never detracts her from her studies. She loves to perform, she has won several major dance competitions and
has participated in many local dance productions. One person had told her after
a performance she danced in that she was true Broadway caliber, and that fueled
her ambitions further.
Aside from dancing, she loves going to vintage clothing stores looking for more
retro-chic outfits and accessories to try out or flipping through the
compilation racks at work to find 70s disco CDs that she doesn't have yet.
History: Amika grew up a
Amika's family life was very warm and loving, yet
most of the time it was her, Heather and their mother. Her father's job was
very demanding - he had taken a job as a sports reporter at a major
At the age of 7, Amika's parents had found out that
much of Amika's creative and academic prowess were due to autism, an intellectual disability. They
promised to keep raising Amika and Heather with the
love and attention they needed - especially with Amika,
and vowed to fight for her whenever necessary.
However, a big event changed the Cassidy family's lives. When Amika was 9 and Heather was 7, Michael was offered the
position of editor of the sports department at a newspaper in
Amika graduated from Lyon a couple of years later and entered
The improvements made here are excellent though I do believe you
could continue to add to her personality and incorporate her flaws into the
personality section to help. Otherwise this section is near perfection, just go
that extra inch and finish her up.
I
still think more needs to be added to her personality. :] You've got down the
right idea with the traits listed, but elaborate on them in your paragraphs!
You still need to add her disability into this paragraph, I am not seeing it.
And your history is wonderful, you did a great job cleaning it up, I couldn't
ask for anything better! <3
V. Relations & Miscellaneous
NPCs/Relationships:
Michael Cassidy (Father): 44 years old, born in
Nicole Kelly (Mother): 37 years old, born in
Heather Cassidy (Sister): 15 years old, born in
Amy Myers (Best Friend): 17 years old, a senior at CHS in Amika's
homeroom and is also in her English class and study hall period. Amy was Amika's first friend when she moved to
Love Life: Currently single, Amika's studies and
ambitions mostly leave her little time to seek love. However, she hopes to find
a man who is kind, caring, has a great sense of humor
and shares her love for disco dancing and retro music.
Character Theme Song: "Night Fever" by the Bee Gees, they were the
very essence of disco in the late 70s and fits Amika's
character really well.
Secret(s): Despite her outgoing, carefree nature, Amika
has an intellectual disability. She is autistic, and was diagnosed at the age
of 7. This is the main reason why she is able to express herself so freely
through her creative streak and her academic abilities. Sometimes, she has
trouble understanding other people's points of view which can greatly affect
her interactions and reationships with others.
However, when she becomes a Senshi, her disability
doesn't stand in her way.
VI. Proelium Soldier
Senshi Name: Sailor Disco
Henshin Item: A star pendant with an attached disco mirrorball that she wears on a silver charm necklace (it
kind of looks like this).
Henshin Phrase: “Disco Alto Power, Make Up!"
Description: Amika holds her pendant aloft as she
speaks her henshin phrase. The mirrorball
on the pendant glitters and sends out multicolored beams of light that surround
her and form her sailor fuku. Silver beams of light
wrap around her arms, forming her gloves and bracelet, then wrap around her
ankles, forming the ribbons on her shoes. She spins around once as her
headpiece appears, then finishes in her final pose: left hand on hip, right leg
extended outward, right arm up with index finger pointing upwards, suggesting a
disco pose.
Fuku (using Fuku #2)
PRIMARY COLOR: Silver
SECONDARY COLOR: Fuchsia
TERTIARY COLOR: Aqua
PATTERN: Zigzag pattern in clear rhinestones.
NECKLACE: Silver marabou choker with a star pendant.
EARRINGS: Big silver hoop earrings.
SAILOR FLAP/COLLAR: Silver lame, standard alto collar, 1 stripe in silver
sequins.
SLEEVES: None.
GLOVES: The right glove is fuchsia lame in the default style, held together by
aqua crystals and cuffed in silver-colored marabou just above the wrist and
below her shoulder. The left glove is silver lame, but held with fuchsia
sequins. A silver bangle bracelet with a small mirrorball
charm adorns her left wrist (the charm is her Mirrorball
Orb).
CENTER BOW: None.
BELT: Silver twine with sparkling silver tassel at ends.
DRESS: The corset top is Fuku #2 default style, silver lame edged in aqua lame trim. Skirt is the
default length and style, in silver lame with aqua trim. The top of the skirt
is fuchsia chiffon combined with the rhinestone pattern extending from front to
back on the left side.
BACK BOW: Default style for the back bow, in aqua lame.
SHOES: Silver platform heels with sparkling silver chiffon ribbon winding
around the ankles, closed back and toe.
TIARA: Silver headband with mirrorball-like star
headpiece worn on the left side of her head, three fuchsia rhinestone trails
glittering from the bottom point.
Challenge Phrase: "Under the glittering night, I am the funky Alto
Soldier, Sailor Disco. Feel the fever rising!"
Additional Notes/Changes: When Amika changes into
Sailor Disco, her hair transforms from plain straight into wavy with silver
glitter. The area underneath her necklace and on her shoulders is flecked with
silver body glitter. In her Senshi form, her face is made
up with glittery silver eyeshadow, black eyeliner,
pink blush and fuchsia lipstick, and she wears 3 star-shaped fuchsia,
clear and aqua rhinestones (her Senshi colors) in a
fuchsia-clear-aqua pattern underneath her left eye.
Attacks (Up to 2 per senshi)
Attack Names: Silver Mirrorball Reflection (song:
"I Love The Nightlife" by Alicia Bridges) , Midnight Fever Stardust
(song: "If I Can't Have You" by Yvonne Elliman)
Attack Descriptions:
Silver Mirrorball Reflection: She passes her right
hand over the bracelet on her left wrist which activates the Mirrorball Orb - it detaches from her bracelet, increases
to about 4 inches in diameter and appears in front of her. Holding it in front
of her in both hands, she pirouettes twice as light swirls around her. She
shouts her attack phrase, the mirroball glitters and
silver light is emitted from it.
Midnight Fever Stardust: With her right hand resting on her left shoulder, she
swings her left arm upward. Her right hand does several gestures as she
performs a combination of dance steps. The energy causes brightly colored stars
to rise from the floor beneath her and swirl around her body. She brings her
left hand down from its skyward position and says her attack phrase.
Attack Effects: When Silver Mirrorball Reflection is
used, the silver light that is emitted allows her to see enemy weaknesses. It
is usually used as a set-up or combination attack with another Senshi. Not a lot of her energy is used up in this attack.
Midnight Fever Stardust is primarily a defense attack. The swirling colored
stars act as a shield that defends her from enemy attacks. She only uses this
in emergency situations when she is threatened. The energy emitted from the
attack can lower her strength level however.
Weapon: Mirrorball Orb: A disco mirrorball
that is used in her Silver Mirrorball Reflection attack (see attack description for size). She wears it as a
small charm on the silver bangle she wears on her left wrist in Senshi form.
Other Information: None
VII: Guardians
Deleted because did not like the original concept for the guardian. Sailor
Disco has no guardian.
VIII: Writing Sample Optional
This is part of an otaku SM fanfiction
series I was working on a long time ago - I never got to finish it.
Then, it happened. A dark force spread over the planets of the Silver
Millennium and cast an eerie shadow over the Moon. Queen Beryl and her evil
army attacked, destroying the inhabitants of the
The princesses of the Gemstone Region cast their powers to drive back the
darkness that was surrounding their planets, each wearing a protective sailor
outfit in their kingdom’s respective colors. Although the darkness was driven
away, they felt the white-hot light of the
On the Moon, Serenity used the last of her strength to send all the trapped
inhabitants 1000 years into the future on Earth, with no memory of the events
of the battle. Sparkling moonbeam crystals rose from the ground and floated
away from the Moon, towards Earth. "On behalf of the Moon, you will be
free again," were Queen Serenity’s last words.
The crystals approached Earth and spun around in its orbit. While many of the
crystals landed in
IX: Other Shtuff
Potential plans:
I would like to see Amika develop a relationship with
someone, as her ambitions leave her little time for romance. I would also like
to see her achieve her dream of becoming a Broadway dancer and take a step into
becoming a full-fledged, independent young woman doing anything she sets her
mind to, despite her disability.
Miscellaneous:
Amika lives for the nightlife of Vegas, she wants to
be free under the neon lights and embrace it as much as possible thanks to her
roots from her old hometown of
Final Verdict: Accepted with Mandatory Revision;
Personality (Lack of elaboration on traits)
I think that Amika
has really come full-circle and that overall she has
finally become the Sailor Disco this group needs. I feel like she really fits
the bill and has come what will be the perfect Disco. I am glad you stuck
through and tried so many times, and continued to tweak and add and take away
to perfect Amika to her roll. It's nice to see her
come around - my only suggestions are to beef up the personality a little bit
still and incouperate her flaws into your paragraphs.
Otherwise I feel this was great.
This is how I imagined Sailor Disco. :) You
have done such a brilliant job shaping Amika into the
ideal personification of disco! Her senshi form is
perfect, her physical appearance screams disco, and everything else about her
is ideal!
You have also succeeded in cleaning up her history but I feel that you need to
add a few more sentences or even a whole paragraph or two to her personality.
You added the perfect traits for Amika (I'm especially loving the free-spiritedness added in there!)
considering her genre and astrological sign, but you have not shown it in the
personality at all. Same with her autism.
Honestly, I'd drop the autism at this point as it does not seem to flow with
the personality at all, but if you want to use it, make sure to go back and add
this into her personality section too so it works with all the other traits
listed!
You must make these changes before entering Amika
into any stories in the game. Once you have submitted these changes through a
response to your application, a forum PM to me(Bee),
or an email to proeliumcantus@yahoo.com, we will allow Sailor Disco into the
actual game. But, she is yours nevertheless! Just remember to make these
changes. :D